This Front cover I think is good as the direct look on the face of the band help to make them appeal to the reader more , also they are not smiling which will show you that they are not a pop star type band, when the pictures are taken , also the Headline at the top of the page will be in a digital style which goes with the theme of the magazine, And the Tag line underneath Or imbetween the picture says Stare in the eyes of sucsess whcih works as they are staring directly down the lense of the camera
This contents page is good i think as the pictures within the writing works well and creates a flow within the magazine , the Camera style pictures on the side will not be there in the magazine as I thought you the target audience would not appriciate it as it seems to be aimed for a bit more of a Pop magazine and doesnt really work with a rock mag. and again the Digital logo on the top is again the the digital font which makes it look better.
The First side of my double page spread is The first word in the band name and half of the picture in which the band will be sitting on a sofa with their instruments , this is good as it goes against the normal idea of a magazine and i have only seen it done once in the nme magazine , but it shows them relaxing and you do not normally see this side of a band , also all of the tag lines will be in the same font as the title on the front page to make it look better , and the second page is he continuation of the first as it has got the rest of the picture on it where they are on the sofa, it also has the second half of there name which again is in the Bladeline font which shows there spikey personality and it also contributes to the whole theme of the magazine as it doesnt look like a pop magazine as it is sharp and kind of agressive, also the added picture in the corner of the two pages goes well as they can blend in




